OUT OF THE BLUE

by MAXI
(MAURITIUS)

A broken marriage from long ago
Children wild and raring to go
Death loss depression and pain
Alone with myself wounded again

Then out of the blue with eyes of blue
Our paths crossed and I met you
Your smiling face your laugh made me high
When having fun how time would fly

I fell for you like a blinded fool
No hesitating to give you my all
Then my god you took me bit by bit
My self worth my confidence my smiles and my wit

You trod me deep into the ground
Slowly silently with out a sound
Piece by piece you tore me apart
My mind my body my soul my heart

I watched your face turn crimson
I begged I cried I tried to reason
Foaming from your mouth shouting shouting
Like a monster sweating shaking spitting

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Aug 23, 2011
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I can relate
by: Anonymous

I feel your pain! It describes my life as well! Finally out of it though so hopefully things will get better for me and you too! Hope that they have already!

Jul 22, 2011
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Peace at last then.
by: Anonymous

How strange an ending.

Jul 22, 2011
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he died alone in suspicious circumstances
by: Anonymous

he died alone in suspicious circumstances

Nov 01, 2010
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Oh Maxi...
by: Liz- Editor

Thank you so much for posting, your pain is obvious in this poem.

How did it all end? I hope to God it has.

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